Friday, 29 June 2018

Spelling words by teacher I don't get anyone sometimes I use tolls to quit for spelling but sometimes for spelling is not what I want it to say and Paragraph in my writing so It will be tidy.


The Triathlon
Monday 20th March
Nervously I was walking to the start. They remarked “Ready get set go!”
I shot off with all my mates. I was running as fast as I could go.
I jumped on my bike. I pedalled on my bike.
I sped on my bike twice around the field. I was feeling really tired.
I was coming fourth.I sprinted to the pool and hopped in the pool.
I was freezing. I swam as fast as I could and I finally reached the finish line.

Parker.



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2 comments:

  1. Anakin26 July 2018 at 11:54

    Kia ora, I am Anakin from riverdale school
    I learnt that your gymnastics thats cool.
    Maybe you could good at maths
    I liked that you dotell me another sport.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://”riverdalegisanakino.blogspot.com/”>here</a>

    Mā te wā
    Anakin._______

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  2. Anonymous10 August 2018 at 10:43

    hi Anakin thank you of your camment

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